First draft 2 minute social realism intro

I decided to reshoot some of my intro because of a number of reasons. The first reason being that some of my shots weren't straight enough, for example some shots of the kettle. Another reason is that I have grasped the sense of episodic editing, however I need to make the shots simpler because they are hard to follow. I also need to include more detailed mise-en-scene to create an accurate representation of my characters. The drawings need to be developed because they convey the horror/thriller genre more than social realism. I will develop them by adding colour, adding more detail, and changing the drawings. Also, I can hide my character's identity more, to keep the audience interested and engage them. The production credits and titles need to be improved to show that this is an intro, rather than a scene later on in the film. I will improve them by adding more title and making the production credits more coherent and clever. Because of these reasons i have decided to reshoot some of my intro.